Random Sushi Strip(s)

[Threeboy]

TrueNuff: Multiplicity
@ Sushi Place
<P> Brando: You know, it's tough love.
Waiter: Ah, ready to order?!
<P> Rob: (Holding menu): ah, hmm.. How should I do this.. I know! Three orders please.
<P> Waiter: Three of what?
<P> Rob: The menu.

[Threeboy]

TrueNuff:
@ Double Dribble
<p> Brando: Holy crap. THere's still alot of food left.
Rob: Hold on a second.
<p> Rob: (strange face)
<p> Rob: (strange face again)
<p> Rob: (strange face again)
<p> Rob: (strange face again)
<p> Rob: (strange face again)
<p> Rob: Done!
<p> Brando: What the hell was that?
Rob: (more food on plate) defragmenting my stomach.

[Threeboy]

gonna put this script in here too now...


TrueNuff: x
@ all you can eat sushi?
<P> Trey: Dude, we ordered way too much this time.
Jay: They're gonna make us pay full price on all the stuff we didn't eat.
<P> Trey: Time to take one for the team big guy.
Rob: Oh, allright...
<P> (shot of two red blood cells with food piled in the background, supposed to be inside of rob's stomach) BloodCell: No room here, send it upstairs!
<P> (closeup on robs head, rob is grabbing his head) Rob: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!

[J.Rai]

I jsut dunno about the defrag thing

[Threeboy]

I jsut dunno about the defrag thingheh. make the cut coach.

[Threeboy]

okay, we put the defrag near the START of this series.. and re-word it more to the likes of

<p> ROB: I'm gettin full guys...
<p> JAY: Whaaaaaat? So much left is there. EAT YOU MUST!

ROB: okay, hold up...

<p> Rob: (strange face)
<p> Rob: (strange face again)
<p> Rob: (strange face again)
<p> Rob: (strange face again)

<p> Rob: Done!
<p> Brando: What the hell was that?
Rob: (more food on plate) defragnebted my stomach.

[Threeboy]

we can kick it like dis yo.
(we can start the second sushi series like this)

TrueNuff: Finish Him!
@ Funky shit - like japanamation star bursts behind em and sparkles.
<P> (super funky letters) SUPER SUSHI II
(turbo) PLUS! PLUS! HYPER!
<P> ROB: (Sportin the karate kid headband) HOYAAAAAAAAAAAA!
<P> BRANDO: WATAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
<P> Trey: We wouldn't have came back to sushi nights if we knew you guys were gonna do that.
Jay: We can't take you guys ANYWHERE.

.................................

TrueNuff: Finish Him!
@ Funky shit
<P> (super funky letters) SUPER SUSHI COMBO II
(turbo) PLUS! PLUS! HYPER! (remix)
<P> ROB: Attack me if you dare, I will crush you!*
<P> BRANDO: You must survive my dragon munch to stand a chance**
<P> Trey: We wouldn't have came back to sushi nights if we knew you guys were gonna do that.
Jay: We can't take you guys ANYWHERE.

* - street fighter II lines
** - modified street fighter line

[Brando]

I think those last ones could be fun...

Perhaps an attack strip?

TrueNuff: Sho-Ryu-Ken a thing or two!
<P>
[Brando & Rob still sushi fighting, tons of food on table]
ROB: Is that all you've got?
BRANDO: Take THIS!
<P>
[Brando facing camera, holds hands together ala Haduken pose, flashing BG is blue/black with the electricity thing]
BRANDO:(long scream thing that crosses multiple panels)
EEEEEEEEEUUUUUYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!
*or*
BBBRRRAAAAANNNDDOOOOKKKKENNNN!
<P>
[Over multiple panels, sushi is piling up in his hands instead of a fireball]
<P>
[Side view of the sushi blast]
<P>
[Normal lighting, Jay and Trey covered in sushi, Rob is clean, smiling and chewing]
BRANDO (amazed):I accept defeat.

[Threeboy]

we talked about this last night,
have a one where the sushi workers talk amongst themselves...

- the man with red hair, he eat for two.

- i am unsure if they can pay? give them more, they wont be able to run then.

[Threeboy]

we need major expandling.

[Threeboy]

or atleast a wrap up and a starter! :D

[Threeboy]

TrueNuff: Super Smash Bros.

Rob: Watch my impression of kirby!

(inhales dynamite rolls)

(flash to kitchen in the back, chefs dressed japenese style, perhaps starwars stuff in the BG if I can)
Chef1: What is it?
Chef2: it's as if a dozen dynamite rolls cried out and were suddenly silenced.

[Threeboy]

"Surry Roll? What's in those?"

"Crabs"

[Brando]

hahaha... gross...

how can we make this into a strip? maybe we go to a sushi joint near jeffys place?

TrueNuff:
<P>
[@couch]
TREY: I'm hungry. Anyone else?
BRANDO: I could eat.
ROB: Sure.
<P>
JAY: There's a new sushi place down the street.
TREY: Nice. Lets go.
<P>
[@ table in sushi place]
JAY: Hey guys, check this out. They have something called a 'Surrey Roll'.
ROB: Really? What's in it?
<P>
JAY: According to the menu, crabs.

I'm not sure what the gang should be doing here though as a response...
Grossed out? Laughing? POING expressions?

[Threeboy]

they can be laughing...

check our first sushi series, we already established the sushi place.

things we have to write
+ Jay & Trey vowed they'd never have sushi again, why do they go back? Trey's addiction?

[Brando]

the only reason I added a new place was because it should be from surrey and it has rolls we've never heard of. otherwise we need to explain why we havent seen em before.

Maybe rob and brando can convince em to go?

[Threeboy]

surrey rolls dont have to be IN surrey.

[The Rob]

Hey, I love organization, so I've again condensed the thread into one post so we can look at all the strips floating around. these are not in any particular order, they're all just in one big post

[The Rob]

TrueNuff: Super Smash Bros.
-----------------------------
@Sushi place, Brando, Jay, Rob, and Trey are sitting at a table
<P>
Everyone eating, Rob is piling rolls onto one plate.
Trey(happy, in his own little world): These are some good dynamite rolls!
Brando(sad): …and then she smacked me…
Jay: Next time don’t start off by shaking her boobs.

<P>
Rob’s finished stacking , we see stacks of dynamite rolls are in front of Rob.
Rob(happy): Hey check out my impersonation of Kirby!

<P>
Rob inhales dynamite rolls. Brando, Jay, and Trey all look amazed.

<P>
(flash to kitchen in the back, chefs dressed Japanese style, perhaps starwars stuff in the BG if I can)
Chef1: What is it?
Chef2: It's as if dozens of dynamite rolls cried out at once and were suddenly silenced.

************************************************** ***********
TrueNuff: Multiplicity
@ Sushi Place
<P>
Brando: You know, it's tough love.
Waiter: Ah, ready to order?!

<P>
Rob: (Holding menu): ah, hmm.. How should I do this.. I know! Three orders please.

<P>
Waiter: Three of what?

<P>
Rob: The menu.

************************************************** ***********
TrueNuff: x
@Sushi place
<P>
Trey: Dude, we ordered way too much this time.
Jay: They're gonna make us pay full price on all the stuff we didn't eat.

<P>
Trey: Time to take one for the team, big guy.
Rob: Oh, allright...

<P>
BloodCell(shot of two red blood cells with food piled in the background, supposed to be inside of rob's stomach): No room here, send it upstairs!

<P>
Rob (closeup on robs head, rob is grabbing his head): AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!

************************************************** ***********
TrueNuff: Finish Him!
@ Funky shit - Like japanamation star bursts behind em and sparkles.
<P>
(super funky letters) SUPER SUSHI II
(turbo) PLUS! PLUS! HYPER!

<P>
Rob(Sporting the karate kid headband, doing the on one foot karate kid kick setup): HOYAAAAAAAAAAAA!

<P>
Brando(ninja outfit, some crazy pose): WATAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH

<P>
Trey: We wouldn't have came back to sushi nights if we knew you guys were gonna do that.
Jay: We can't take you guys ANYWHERE.

ALT
TrueNuff: Finish Him!
@ Funky shit
<P>
(super funky letters) SUPER SUSHI COMBO II
(turbo) PLUS! PLUS! HYPER! (remix)

<P>
Rob: Attack me if you dare, I will crush you!*
Maybe we could have these panels as subtitles? Since dubbing effects don’t really work well in comics, we could have them say some Chinese/Japanese words(just put a bunch of characters) and then the english on the bottom as a subtitle.

<P>
Brando: You must survive my dragon munch to stand a chance**

<P>
Trey: We wouldn't have came back to sushi nights if we knew you guys were gonna do that.
Jay: We can't take you guys ANYWHERE.


************************************************** ***********
TrueNuff: Sho-Ryu-Ken a thing or two!
<P>
[Brando & Rob still sushi fighting, tons of food on table]
Rob: Is that all you've got?
Brando: Take THIS!

<P>
[Brando facing camera, holds hands together ala Haduken pose, flashing BG is blue/black with the electricity thing]
BRANDO:(long scream thing that crosses multiple panels)
EEEEEEEEEUUUUUYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!
*or*
BBBRRRAAAAANNNDDOOOOKKKKENNNN!

<P>
[Over multiple panels, sushi is piling up in his hands instead of a fireball] =

<P>
[Side view of the sushi blast]

<P>
[Normal lighting, Jay and Trey covered in sushi, Rob is clean, smiling and chewing]
Brando(amazed):I accept defeat.

************************************************** ***********
TrueNuff: Never a sure thing.
<P>
[@couch]
TREY: I'm hungry. Anyone else?
BRANDO: I could eat.
ROB: Sure.
<P>
JAY: There's a new sushi place down the street.
TREY: Nice. Lets go.
<P>
[@ table in sushi place]
JAY: Hey guys, check this out. They have something called a 'Surrey Roll'.
ROB: Really? What's in it?
<P>
JAY: According to the menu, crabs.


************************************************** ***********
TrueNuff: Making room.
<p> ROB: I'm gettin full guys...
<p> JAY: Whaaaaaat? So much left is there. EAT YOU MUST!

ROB: okay, hold up...

<p> Rob: (strange face)
<p> Rob: (strange face again)
<p> Rob: (strange face again)
<p> Rob: (strange face again)

<p> Rob: Done!
<p> Brando: What the hell was that?
Rob: (more food on plate) defragmented my stomach.

************************************************** ***********

[Threeboy]

we cant refer to it as "the new sushi place" as we've already established a sushi place

[The Rob]

TrueNuff: Eyes Wide Shut
-----------------------------
@Sushi place
<P>
See Trey holding a straw with a bunch of wasabi in front of him.
Jay: What are you doing?
Trey: I saw this on Jackass the Movie, it was funny!

<P>
Trey(Snorts up nose some wasabi): SNORT.

<P>
Jay looks suprised.
Trey looks stunned eyes wide, maybe green coloration of his skin.

<P>
Trey(Underneath table or something, throwing up): Blerg...
Jay: They have that disclaimer for a reason you know.

[Threeboy]

haha, i thought jay does the blarging!

[Threeboy]

we could probably whip this up into shape soon

[Brando]

yeah, I like the modified street fighter lines. instead of it being a new sushi place we can just have it be a new menu item (the surrey roll) or maybe even he was just trying to make a joke.

*COMMENT REMOVED*

[Threeboy]

hahah

[Threeboy]

TrueNuff: Never a sure thing.
<P>
[@couch]
TREY: I'm hungry. Anyone else?
BRANDO: I could eat.
ROB: Sure.
<P>
JAY: There's a new sushi place down the street.
TREY: I guess enough time has passed, I'm willing to give sushi a chance.
<P>
[@ table in sushi place]
JAY: Hey guys, check this out. They have something called a 'Surrey Roll'.
ROB: Really? What's in it?
<P>
JAY: According to the menu, crabs.

************************************************** ***********

TrueNuff: Finish Him!
@ Funky shit - Like japanamation star bursts behind em and sparkles.
<P>
(super funky letters) SUPER SUSHI II
(turbo) PLUS! PLUS! HYPER!

<P>
Rob(Sporting the karate kid headband, doing the on one foot karate kid kick setup): HOYAAAAAAAAAAAA!

<P>
Brando(ninja outfit, some crazy pose): WATAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH

<P>
Trey: We wouldn't have came back to sushi nights if we knew you guys were gonna do that.
Jay: We can't take you guys ANYWHERE.

ALT

TrueNuff: Finish Him!
@ Funky shit
<P>
(super funky letters) SUPER SUSHI COMBO II
(turbo) PLUS! PLUS! HYPER! (remix)

<P>
Rob: Attack me if you dare, I will crush you!*
Maybe we could have these panels as subtitles? Since dubbing effects don’t really work well in comics, we could have them say some Chinese/Japanese words(just put a bunch of characters) and then the english on the bottom as a subtitle.

<P>
Brando: You must survive my dragon munch to stand a chance**

<P>
Trey: We wouldn't have came back to sushi nights if we knew you guys were gonna do that.
Jay: We can't take you guys ANYWHERE.



************************************************** ***********

TrueNuff: Multiplicity
@ Sushi Place
<P>
Brando: You know, it's tough love.
Waiter: Ah, ready to order?!

<P>
Rob: (Holding menu): ah, hmm.. How should I do this.. I know! Three orders please.

<P>
Waiter: Three of what?

<P>
Rob: The menu.

************************************************** ***********
TrueNuff: Super Smash Bros.
@Sushi place, Brando, Jay, Rob, and Trey are sitting at a table
<P>
Everyone eating, Rob is piling rolls onto one plate.
Trey(happy, in his own little world): These are some good dynamite rolls!
Brando(sad): …and then she smacked me…
Jay: Next time don’t start off by shaking her boobs.

<P>
Rob’s finished stacking , we see stacks of dynamite rolls are in front of Rob.
Rob(happy): Hey check out my impersonation of Kirby!

<P>
Rob inhales dynamite rolls. Brando, Jay, and Trey all look amazed.

<P>
(flash to kitchen in the back, chefs dressed Japanese style, perhaps starwars stuff in the BG if I can)
Chef1: What is it?
Chef2: It's as if dozens of dynamite rolls cried out at once and were suddenly silenced.


************************************************** ***********

TrueNuff: Fantastic Voyage
@Sushi place
<P>
Trey: Dude, we ordered way too much this time.
Jay: They're gonna make us pay full price on all the stuff we didn't eat.

<P>
Trey: Time to take one for the team, big guy.
Rob: Oh, allright...

<P>
BloodCell(shot of two red blood cells with food piled in the background, supposed to be inside of rob's stomach): No room here, send it upstairs!

<P>
Rob (closeup on robs head, rob is grabbing his head): AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!


************************************************** ***********

TrueNuff: Sho-Ryu-Ken a thing or two!
<P>

Rob: Is that all you've got?
Brando: Take THIS!

<P>
[Brando facing camera, holds hands together ala Haduken pose, flashing BG is blue/black with the electricity thing]
BRANDO:(long scream thing that crosses multiple panels)
EEEEEEEEEUUUUUYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!
*or*
BBBRRRAAAAANNNDDOOOOKKKKENNNN!

<P>
[Over multiple panels, sushi is piling up in his hands instead of a fireball] =

<P>
[Side view of the sushi blast]

<P>
[Normal lighting, Jay and Trey covered in sushi, Rob is clean, smiling and chewing]
Brando(amazed):I accept defeat.

[b]I dont know about this one

************************************************** ***********

TrueNuff: Making room.
<p> ROB: I'm gettin full guys...
<p> JAY: Whaaaaaat? So much left is there. EAT YOU MUST!

ROB: okay, hold up...

<p> Rob: (strange face)
<p> Rob: (strange face again)
<p> Rob: (strange face again)
<p> Rob: (strange face again)

<p> Rob: Done!
<p> Brando: What the hell was that?
Rob: (more food on plate) defragmented my stomach.


************************************************** ***********

[Threeboy]

TrueNuff: Eyes Wide Shut
-----------------------------
@Sushi place
<P>
See Trey holding a straw with a bunch of wasabi in front of him.
Jay: What are you doing?
Trey: I saw this on Jackass the Movie, it was funny!

<P>
Trey(Snorts up nose some wasabi): SNORT.

<P>
Jay looks suprised.
Trey looks stunned eyes wide, maybe green coloration of his skin.

<P>
Trey(Underneath table or something, throwing up): Blerg...
Jay: They have that disclaimer for a reason you know.

don't know about this one either.

[Brando]

All scripts above this point are closed. If you want to add new scripts to the end of the series you may do so below...

[Threeboy]

notes:
drop the second sushi fight 8 paneler
add strip "why'd you guys start eating sushi again? (hot waitress drops off food) oh..."

[Brando]

Wednesday July 2, 2003

TrueNuff: Fresh Off the Boat (is this racist? It could mean fish!)
(truenuff20030702.jpg)
<P>
ROB: So why did you guys decide to come back to sushi again after ‘the incident’?
<P> (thought bubble with pic of ‘the incident’… either from the actual strip or maybe something afterwards… lying on the street somewhere with wasabi all over their faces or whatever)
<P> (hot waitress walks by and drops off food)
<P>
JAY: We remembered what we were missing.
BRANDO: <something here>

[Brando]

TrueNuff: Fresh Off the Boat (is this racist? It could mean fish!)
(truenuff20030702.jpg)
<P>
JAY: Man, I sure missed this stuff.
TREY: [mouth full, pointing at something, the roof maybe] Mrrgh! Ummgrfm.
<P>
ROB: So why did you guys decide to come back to sushi again after ‘the incident’?
<P>(hot waitress walks by and drops off food - cleavage shot)
<P>
JAY: We remembered what we were missing.
[insert a *dap*, we need another one of those]

[Threeboy]

*dap*

[Threeboy]

we gotta fit the "the man with the red hair, he eat for two" type scripts... and we need a finisher... GET ON THAT POST HASTE :twisted:

[Brando]

Hahaha... the *dap* was supposed to be in the last panel, or did you get that too?

I think that wednesdays is good so far... I'll try and do some of the other strips today too...

[Brando]

TrueNuff: BBQ Pork Bun in the Oven
<P>
[worker1 & worker2 are looking over at crews table]
W1: These four, I have seen them before
<P>
W2: Yes, they come here often
W1: We must make good money from them!
<P>
W2: Not so much
W1: Why not?
<P>
W2: Red-haired man, he eat for two

TrueNuff:
<P>
MANAGER: Here is your bill
BRANDO: We're not done yet
<P>
MANAGER: Time limit is 90 minutes
TREY: It doesn't say that. We'll take 8 more california rolls
<P>
MANAGER (asking employee): Doesn't menu say 90 minutes?
W1 (looking at menu): No Boss...
<P>
MANAGER (carrying tray of rolls): White devils...

TrueNuff: Is that a roll in your pocket?
<P>
(leaving restaurant)
JAY: I can't believe how much you ate Robbo
ROB: We'll, I had to get something for lunch tomorrow
<P>
JAY: But, they don't allow takeout
<P>
(rob pulls out a giant sushi ball from his coat)
ROB: What they don't know
<P>
TREY: I'll give you $20 for that....

ALT: I bow down to you...
ALT: My leige...

[Threeboy]

#1
solid. i can go nuts with super japanamation facial expressions too

#2
not sure, it's boarderline usable

#3
we just need a punchey punchline ending

[Brando]

Ok, #1 os wednesday and #3 is friday (post a good finisher if you think of one!) and well end this bitch this week

[Threeboy]

i'd post a good finisher if I had one :P

[Threeboy]

perhaps rob wakes up from a coma and then trey goes, we got you some take-out and pulls out a big bag?

but that woldn't work with the strip that's going on wednesday.

[Threeboy]

rob & i got one to finish AND a followup for next week. I think... i'll post when I get home

if you think of one post it we'll compare and/or save one.

[Threeboy]

TrueNuff: you can't do that on television
@ Walking home / resturant
<P>
TREY: I feel sick.
Brando: but it's a GOOD sick.
Jay: Trouble with asian food though, an hour later we'll all be hungry...
ROB: (pulling something out of pocket)

<P>
ROB: (holding HUGE bag) NOT ME!
Guys: :O

<P>
MANAGER: atleast man with red hair leaved. we can get back to business.
WORKER: no we cant!
<P>
WORKER: ...THE FOOD IS ALL GONE!
MANAGER: JESUS CHRIST!

[Brando]

Haha... I'm down with this.

Will they have japanimation expressions? X.X'

[Threeboy]

not sure, i wanted to do that with the last one, but i couldn't bring myself to do it! haha

[Brando]

*PUD*