Lunch?

[Threeboy]

TrueNuff:
@ Brando & 1 guys talking
<P>
(enter julie)
BRANDO: yeah she was really good yesterday.
ROB: Yeah I had her twice.
JAY: I took my time and it lasted for an hour and a half!
<P>
(FILLER)
<P> JULIE: Haha, I get it, you guys are talking about lunch or something.
<P> BRANDO: Lunch?
JULIE: (shocked)

[Brando]

TrueNuff: Miss Understanding
<P>
(BRANDO & ROB & JAY talking, Julie enters)
BRANDO: She was good yesterday, eh?
ROB: Yeah I had her twice.
JAY: I took my time and it lasted for an hour and a half!
<P>
JULIE: Haha, I get it, you guys are talking about lunch, right?
BRANDO: Lunch?
<P> (enter TREY)
JULIE: (shocked)
<P> (JULIE is gone)
ROB: What's with her?
TREY: I guess she missed dinner yesterday.

[Threeboy]

heh, they're both good strips, mine's a bit more open ended, yours has deifnate closure...

[Brando]

I was concerned about how you mentioned we dont want the guys to look TOO much like pigs. If you dont care, then the first is fine too... I can add filler easily.

[Threeboy]

go dinner, yours.

[Brando]

TrueNuff: Miss Understanding
<P>
(BRANDO & ROB & JAY talking, Julie enters)
BRANDO: It was a good round today, eh?
ROB: Yeah, I needed a nap after!
JAY: I took my time and it lasted for an hour and a half!
<P>
JULIE: You can't fool me into thinking dirty, you guys are talking about lunch, right?
BRANDO: Lunch? We haven't had lunch yet.
<P> (enter TREY)
JULIE: (shocked) Pigs!
<P> (JULIE is gone)
ROB: What's with her?
TREY: I guess she missed breakfast.

[Threeboy]

cleaner & better.

if anyone has any reasons why this should be a comic, then please speak now, or forever hold thier anti-daps.

*dap*

[Brando]

no way
*dap*

[Threeboy]

*pud*