This side up (punchline: i'm gonna go to the post office...)

[Threeboy]

TrueNuff: This Side Up
[In Submart, Jay eating w/ a wouthful of food throughout]
<p>Brando: [discouraged]That's it, I give up on girls. I can't take the pain.
<p> Trey: Heartache? Rejection?
Brando: Bruising...
<p> [Jay looks up, mouth still full]Trey: C'mon, you can't give up! You just need to remember what you'll be missing!
<p> [Jay looks down again, uninterested]Brando: [Standing, determined]Right, I’m gonna go to the post office and watch the cute girl lick stamps.
Trey: That’s the spirit!

[Brando]

Perhaps along these lines?

TrueNuff: This Side Up
(Jay's place, or maybe it would be cool to have them at the ol' SubMart!!)

<p>BRANDO: (discouraged look) Guys, I give up on girls. I can't take the pain...
<p> JAY: The heartache getting to ya?
BRANDO: No, the bruising...
<p> TREY: C'mon, you can't give up! You just need to remember what you'll be missing!
<p> BRANDO: Right, I’m gonna go to the post office and watch the cute girl lick stamps.
TREY: That’s the spirit!

[J.Rai]

TrueNuff: This Side Up
[In Submart, Jay eating w/ a wouthful of food throughout]
<p>Brando: [discouraged]That's it, I give up on girls. I can't take the pain.
<p> Trey: Heartache? Rejection?
Brando: Bruising...
<p> [Jay looks up, mouth still full]Trey: C'mon, you can't give up! You just need to remember what you'll be missing!
<p> [Jay looks down again, uninterested]Brando: [Standing, determined]Right, I’m gonna go to the post office and watch the cute girl lick stamps.
Trey: That’s the spirit!

[Threeboy]

looks good.. i updated up top.

[J.Rai]

I don't think we should edit the posts, because it may not be a good change.

[Threeboy]

good point!

[Brando]

I likes the changes. GOod call Jeffy on the not changing the past. Thats back to the future crap.

hehehe

[J.Rai]

OK, I'll add to doenscripts when I get back on Monday

*daps* all around?

[Threeboy]

*dap*