Trey's Cat & Easter...

[Threeboy]

True story, might make a good strip...


the cat is bringing dead rats into the house and hiding them.
its like a sick fucking easter.

[J.Rai]

Some kind of conversation where the two people are talking about two totally diffeent things... like two jokes in one...

TrueNuff: Blind, deaf and dumb date
Trey and some girl meeting for the first time
<p>Chick: So I decided to stop eating meat, because I have too much repect for the animals.
Trey: I like animals.
<p>Chick: And so I found out all I could about those cows, you know, that they use for meat?
Trey: I have a cat.
<p>Chick: And then I found out that that's where leather comes from! Like my shoes!
Trey: He brings dead rats into the house and hides them.
<p>Chick: And then I realize, well, we're all here on earth for a PURPOSE, right?
Trey: It's like a sick fucking Easter.

BOOYEAH

[Threeboy]

*dap*

made me laugh my pants.

[Brando]

Ahaha, I totally laughed at that one too...

Good call with the hippy as contrast :)

[Threeboy]

Truedat. this comic ROCKS. good work jeffy.

[J.Rai]

Great, now it just need context - is it a date? Is it a client meeting? Is it even Trey?

[Threeboy]

trey is good. no context is even gooder.

i like the idea of drawing it in the food court. trey & girl, that's it. no furthur set/up needed.

[J.Rai]

But I wanted to build around it - I guess I don't have to...

[Threeboy]

you could build aftermath.. i don't think it needs a build up ;)

or even spinoff strips. I like it by itself, but more is better for us in the longn run too.

[Threeboy]

*dap*

[Threeboy]

HOLD TEH PHONE!

j.rai & I wrote some scripts to pad this comic, heh. 2 intros and an outro.

[J.Rai]

TrueNuff: Forever Bachelorized
[@ someone's living room - Trey's? - Trey is playing cube]
<p>Julie: Hey, do any of you guys have dates tonight?
<p>Jay: [getting up] Oh, look at the time...
Rob: [leaving] I've got a, um...
[Trey still playing cube]
<p>Trey: [looking around] Hey, where did...
<p>Julie: [sits down next to Trey] You should meet my friend Kirstie!
Trey: [looks straight into camera] FUCK.

TrueNuff: Fifth wheel
[walking to mall]
<p>Julie: ...so her boyfriend just dumps her saying something about constant headaches
[Trey has hands in jacket pockets, looking down at the sidewalk as he walks, kinda moping like]
<p>Julie: but I'm sure you guys will get along great.
Trey: Any particular reason?
<p> Julie: Well, she's pretty, and you guys have so much in common
Trey: Such as?
<p> Julie: [Waving to someone off panel] Well, you're both single!
Julie: Kirstie! Hi!

TrueNuff: Blind, deaf and dumb date
Trey and some girl meeting for the first time
<p>Kirstie: So I decided to stop eating meat, because I have too much repect for the animals.
Trey: I like animals.
<p>Kirstie: And so I found out all I could about those cows, you know, that they use for meat?
Trey: I have a cat.
<p>Kirstie: And then I found out that that's where leather comes from! Like my shoes!
Trey: He brings dead rats into the house and hides them.
<p>Kirstie: And then I realize, well, we're all here on earth for a PURPOSE, right?
Trey: It's like a sick fucking Easter.

TrueNuff: Feel no evil, smell no evil
<p> Kirstie: So she says she got these Britney Spears tickets, and I'm all "Pssh, Britney is a slut"
Trey: Attention fading...
<p> Kirstie: and anyway, only 14 year-olds like her, I only like Mandy Moore, and maybe some of Jessica Simpson's stuff
Trey: Going once...
<p> Kirstie: But she's into Christina Aguilera, and I can respect that, but there's also Shakira...
Trey: Going twice...
<p> Kirstie: ..I don't know, I guess I like all types of music, really.
Trey: [getting up] Fuck this, I'm gone

[Threeboy]

TrueNuff: Feel no evil, smell no evil <-- change that to

TrueNuff: Theory of a Deadman

cause thats where i got the line "Going once, going twice, fuck this I'm gone"

[Threeboy]

OR... TrueNuff: Invisible Man

Since that's the song title.

[Brando]

I dont think I understand why they all take off in the first one. I dont get the threat in Julies statement. Maybe if she said something like "you guys are all single, right?" or maybe she is on the phone and they overhear her say something, but Trey doesnt hear??

Maybe a pre-prequel?

TrueNuff: Zero cents a minute.
[guys playing games, Julie on phone in BG]
<P>
ROB [rubs belly]: Rob wants pizza!
JAY: Then ca-... is she STILL on the phone?
<P>
TREY: Yeah, her friend got dumped and is all upset.
JAY [perks up]: Reeaally... who?
<P>
TREY: No no no... She got dumped for a REASON.
ROB: I hear they call her 'Infiniteeth' because she never shuts her mouth.
<P>
JAY: Whoa, thanks for the warning.
ROB: Speaking of pizza, GET OFF THE PHONE!


<p>
Julie (on phone in BG): I KNOW I can hook you up with SOMEONE...
<p>
Jay: [getting up] Oh, look at the time...
Rob: [leaving] I've got a, um...
[Trey still playing cube]
<p>
Trey: [looking around] Hey, where did...
<p>
Julie: [sits down next to Trey] Remember Kristie?
Trey: [looks straight into camera] FUCK.

Also,

Fifth Wheel:
<p> Julie: [Waving to someone off panel] Well, you're both single!
Julie Bubble # 2: Kirstie! Hi!

So there's a distinction, she should have a second text bubble....

The others are good though.