Brando: Nice BUNS!

[Threeboy]

TrueNuff: Dirty Dozen
@ Somehweres, brando mackin on girl...
<P> Brando: Watch this, I'm on a roll...

<P> Brando: Is your dad a baker? Cause you got some nice buns!

<P> *PUMF* (hit with somtthing)

<P> Trey: Pound cake.
Jay: loaf.

[Brando]

TrueNuff: Dirty Dozen
@ bakery, brando mackin on baker girl
<P>
BRANDO: Watch this, I'm on a roll...
<P>
BRANDO: Is your dad the baker? Cause you got some nice buns!
<P>
*PUMF* (hit with somtthing)
<P>
Trey: Pound cake
Jay: Loaf

[Threeboy]

TrueNuff: Dirty Dozen
@ bakery, brando mackin on baker girl
<P>
BRANDO: Watch this, I'm on a roll...
<P>
BRANDO: Is your dad the baker? Cause you got some nice buns!
<P>
*PUMF* (hit with baugette)
<P>
Trey: Pound cake?
Jay: What a Loaf...

[Threeboy]

jay & trey can be eating gingerbread men in the last panel.

[J.Rai]

What a loaf of what?

[J.Rai]

How about "What a loaf" first and then "of POUND cake" after

[Threeboy]

sounds splendid!

[J.Rai]

and delicious!

[Threeboy]

TrueNuff: Dirty Dozen
@ Somehweres, brando mackin on girl...

<P>
Brando: Watch this, I'm on a roll...

<P>
Brando: Is your dad a baker? Cause you got some nice buns!

<P>
*PUMF* (hit with a baguette or something)

<P>
Jay: What a Loaf.
Trey: Pound cake?

---------------------

maybe have this at the bakery.

[Threeboy]

Heh MAYBE have this at the bakery.

This may conflict with this one:
http://www.truenuff.com/forums/showthread.php?t=1200

[J.Rai]

No, no: "of pound cake?" - as in "A loaf/ of pound cake". Right?

TrueNuff: Dirty Dozen
@ Somehweres, brando mackin on girl...

<P>
Brando: Watch this, I'm on a roll...

<P>
Brando: Is your dad a baker? Cause you got some nice buns!

<P>
*PUMF* (hit with a baguette or something)

<P>
Jay: What a Loaf.
Trey: Of Pound cake?

---------------------

[Threeboy]

That's a good re-write, my only concern now is the potential conflict!

[Threeboy]

Conflict Resolved!

We should make it a a 2 part story with this one.
http://www.truenuff.com/forums/showthread.php?t=1200

[J.Rai]

*Pfrt.* Yeah.

[Threeboy]

TrueNuff: Dirty Dozen
@ bakery, rob is with Jay & Trey to set up subsequent strip.

<P> (brando talking to Jay & Trey)
Brando: Watch this, I'm on a roll...

<P>
Brando: Is your dad a baker? Cause you got some nice buns!

<P>
*PUMF* (hit with a baguette or something)

<P>
Jay: What a Loaf.
Trey: ...Of Pound cake?

[Threeboy]

*dap*

[Threeboy]

*PUD*