[brando pickup] (with a twsit!) brando hits on a smoker...

[Threeboy]

TrueNuff: Black Lung

<P> BRANDO: Excuse me...

<P> GIRL(reaches in purse)
BRANDO: (covers eyes)

<P> GIRL: (cig in mouth) got a light?
BRANDO: Surprised...

<P> BRANDO: (walks off mad) NEVERMIND!
GIRL: (wtf look on her face, one eyebrow raised perhaps)

[Brando]

TrueNuff: Black Lung
<P>
[@ mall. BRANDO walks up to a girl]
BRANDO: Hellooooo...
<P>
[girl is reaching in purse, brando with a big grin :D]
GIRL: Hi cutie.
<P>
[girl puts a cig in her mouth, Brando looks surprised]
GIRL: Got a light?
<P>
[BRANFO walks off mad, she does the peoples eyebrow]
BRANDO: NEVERMIND!

[Threeboy]

j.rai didn't like this strip cause no one got why brando would walk away with the girl.. we need a line where he makes fun of her in the end perhaps...

or she smiles and she has yellow teef?

[Threeboy]

j.rai didn't like this strip cause no one got why brando would walk away with the girl.. we need a line where he makes fun of her in the end perhaps...

or she smiles and she has yellow teef?

[Brando]

I thought it was obvious that smokers were gross, and that the cig is what did it...

[Threeboy]

but brando does like the ladies...

don't know if it's obvious ENOUGh.

perhaps if brando says "I'm not THAT desparate"

[Brando]

Heh, that would be good...

TrueNuff: Black Lung
<P>
[@ mall. BRANDO walks up to a girl]
BRANDO: Hellooooo...
<P>
[girl is reaching in purse, brando with a big grin ]
GIRL: Hi cutie.
<P>
[girl puts a cig in her mouth, Brando looks surprised]
GIRL: Got a light?
<P>
[BRANDO walks off mad, she does the peoples eyebrow]
BRANDO: Smoker? I'm not THAT desperate...

[Threeboy]

perhaps drop the "smoker?" since it's shown she's a smoker

[Threeboy]

"chicks like you are bad for my health"

"no thanks, I don't want penis cancer"

[Threeboy]

BAHHAAHA, axe?

[Threeboy]

this strip gets the axe.