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Threeboy
06-23-2002, 05:23 PM
TRUENUFF: x
@ fruit aisle
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BRANDO: (holding date) Excuse me, do you have any raisins? How about a date?
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J.Rai
06-24-2002, 09:00 PM
TrueNuff: Come one come all, big or small
<p>[girl is loking at canteloupes]
Brando: [enters] Nice melons!
<p>[Girl looks up] Brando: Do you have any raisins? How about a date?
<p>[Brando slips on banana peel] Brando: Waaaaa! *KSHRUK*
<b>Girl [exits]: Fruit!
Threeboy
06-24-2002, 10:24 PM
Bahaha.
good stuff.. standard brando strips have jay & trey.. not his time around?
it dont matter to me though, it's good to mix up the format...
J.Rai
06-24-2002, 10:31 PM
Oh yeah, they can be in there, I just didn't write them parts. I don't think they need any lines in this one though, do you?
Threeboy
06-24-2002, 10:35 PM
in the background is fine. they see all :wink:
Threeboy
06-25-2002, 01:31 AM
*dap*
Brando
06-25-2002, 01:27 PM
If he were asking her for raisins or a date, she would have to be a store employee wouldnt she? Otherwise he could just simply say
TrueNuff: Come one come all, big or small
<p>[girl is loking at cantaloupes]
Brando: [enters] Nice melons!
<p>[Girl looks up, Brando is walking closer] BRANDO: Care for a date?
<p>[Brando slips on banana peel] Brando: Waaaaa! *KSHRUK*
<b>Girl [exits]: Fruit!
OR
What about breaking it into two parts?
TrueNuff: Come one come all, big or small
<p>[girl is loking at cantaloupes]
Brando: [enters] Nice melons!
<p>[Girl looks up, Brando is walking closer] BRANDO: Mind if I test for ripeness?
<p>[Girl whipped one at his crotch, he is bent forward in pain] GIRL: Sure. *GRITCH*
<b>Girl [tossing the other into his face]: Looks tasty, try this one!
TrueNuff: Come, Mr. Tally Man.
<p>[girl is looking at bananas]
Brando: [enters] Hey cutie, are those for dinner...
<p>[Brando is waslking over, doing the 2 handed point or some other rediculous gesture] BRANDO: ... or dessert?
<p>[Brando slips on banana peel] Brando: Waaaaa! *KSHRUK*
<b>Girl [exits]: Fruit!
Threeboy
06-25-2002, 01:53 PM
If he were asking her for raisins or a date, she would have to be a store employee wouldnt she? Otherwise he could just simply say a "Date" is a type of fruit...
why can't he ask for rasins or a date?
Brando
06-25-2002, 02:46 PM
Yeah, I know that, but why would he ask another customer if she had raisins?
Why would a customer have raisins?
If he meant the store, why would a customer answer that?
J.Rai
06-25-2002, 06:13 PM
I like Brando's sayin's. Are they a go?
Threeboy
06-25-2002, 07:31 PM
which? there are 2 alternate storylines...
i think it's fine if he asks a customer for rasins.. or perhaps we can make her look like she works in the produce department.
TrueNuff: Come one come all, big or small
<p>[girl is loking at canteloupes]
Brando: [enters] Nice melons!
<p>[Girl looks up] Brando: Do you have any raisins? How about a date?
<p>[Brando slips on banana peel] Brando: Waaaaa! *KSHRUK*
<b>Girl [exits]: Fruit!
i like that best
J.Rai
06-29-2002, 08:17 PM
I meant that I liked the banana one too :)
But I'm cool with one strip.
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